Narrative response

In class lately we have been writing narratives and responses to narratives. I decided to review Hidden life written by Zak Klempel. 

First I wrote a review and then I reviewed the story with Jakob in a video. Hope you enjoy.
Click the link for my written versionLink

Narrative Writing

For writing in the past few weeks we have been writing narratives. My reflective comments are below.

I really liked writing these narratives, but the editing wasn’t my favorite part but I battled through it. The game of awesome was my favorite part and helped me with this narrative especially. I need to work on my punctuation skills and grammar. Overall I thought I did really well.