Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Why all 1 XV rugby players should be surprise drug tested

In class for the last few weeks of the term we have been writing a variety of speeches and we had to choose one to share in front of the class. I choose to share my speech about why first fifteen rugby players should be surprise drug tested. Some of the ups and downs of my speech journey were that my time management was a bit off but a positive was sharing i felt really confident. i had a lot of prior knowledge on the topic and learnt a lot more along the way. I think i informed my audience a lotmre about the topic



Friday, September 8, 2017

Forces Inertia and balanced forces

Scamborghini ad and reflection

for the past 3 weeksIn class for perssuasive writing we got set the task of making an ad. I chose to make this ad with Niko, Theo, Ridge, Jakob and myself. I had lots of fun making it and we all did an equal share of work. We all thought we met the criteria. I personally thought the lighting and places we filmed didn't work. Our planning worked really well and if i personally could change one thing, i would get a front on shot of the flaming scamborghini going into the lake. Aside from that the ad was a personal success and ithink everyone involved had fun making the ad.

Friday, June 30, 2017

Response writing

For the past 3 Weeks Ruma J has been writing responses for movies,books,art and even rugby matches! Basically we chose something to write a response on, after we wrote the response we had to make a creative response. This could include A fake movie trailer, highlights of the rugby match and artwork. I did my response on the 2011 rugby world cup grand final Between New Zealand and France. For my creative response I did a reenactment of the game. Hope you enjoy.
New Zealand At The 2011 Rugby World Cup

In 2011 the All Blacks were competing in the rugby world cup hosted by New Zealand. The rugby world cup Is held once every 4 years and is competed by 20 of the best rugby nations in the world for the william webb ellis cup. The All Blacks won the competition by beating France in the grand final 8-7 at Eden Park. It was their 2nd world cup win with the only other time they had won the cup was in 1987. It was the largest sporting event held in New Zealand So it was a big deal for the All Blacks to try and take out the cup in front of their home fans.

It was a tournament that was felt all around the world that left fans on the edge of their seats.

After advancing through the pool and finals stages The all blacks were in the grand final against their old mates. France.When I found out it was these two teams in the final I thought it would be another iconic grudge match waiting to happen. There was a bit of history between these 2 sides from the 2007 world cup Quarter final where Wayne Barnes the referee let a clear forward pass through to let the french to score the game winning try. This knocked new zealand out of the 2007 world cup. They were looking for revenge.

One key moment was the surprise selection of Stephen Donald. I found it amazing because of the depth in the All Blacks in the first five position. Because in the tournament Dan carter and Colin Slade both got injured early. It was astonishing that he was still ready to play a game for the all blacks. He was that unprepared his jersey didn’t fit him anymore and he was white baiting the day before he got the call up. He played the game in an undersized jersey.

The game was an edge of your seat affair that left fans in suspense. The game had plenty of clinical moments with the first one being Tony Woodcock’s try off a sneaky line out move. The lead could have been extended by more but Piri Weepu couldn’t land his kicks. A moment that was vital in the game was when Aaron Cruden got Injured and on came the unlikely her, Stephen Donald. When he came on I felt annoyed that Cruden got injured but the game must go on. At halftime it was 5-0. Everyone knew that the door was wide open for the french to make a comeback. It had me quite worried.

The game continued to keep fans engaged into the second half as  New Zealand got a penalty 40 Metres out from the french try line within Stephen Donald's kicking range. They took the penalty goal option to try and extend their lead. I felt nervous when he was taking the kick. He landed the penalty goal which was so clinical for later in the game. 2 minutes later the french Scored a try under the goal posts with Thierry Dusautoir. It was converted and the french were right back in the game. This Concerned me knowing that the french will fight.
The french had a chance to take the lead but blew the penalty kick. I felt relieved but only for a short time. In the dying seconds of the game the french conceded a penalty and the all blacks kicked it out and won the game. The excitement was real. I felt really relieved, happy, and excited that the 24 year wait was over for New Zealand to win their 2nd word cup.

The game was wonderfully played with plenty of twists and turns. If you are new to the game of rugby I suggest you watch a Bledisloe cup match. Also you can get behind your nation every 4 years for the next rugby world cup. I recommend that you watch this match as it was big deal for everyone in the rugby community.


Wednesday, June 14, 2017

Trailblazer in space Poem

Trailblazer In Space Giant Haiku
Feeling great about it
Ready for takeoff right now
Really excited

Things are great up here
The photo is keeping me
Nobody to talk to

65 years gone
Tell sweet mother I’m coming
Just give me some time

23000
Targus fugit Bags packed bro
The chimp is back home

Starting the plunge down
Earth here i am take me back
Back into orbit

I’ve come back for you
Nature is what I have pictured
Sweet mother I’m back

Not what I wanted
Why the concrete jungles Mum
Tell me what happened

It’s not a planet
It’s a home for all of us

Including me here

Wednesday, June 7, 2017

The Kitchen Stove Review


The Kitchen stove review
The Kitchen Stove by Eric Wilson created in 1943 is an abstract piece of art that is a collage depicting a kitchen stove. In the picture if you look at the piece of art in the right angles you can see these things: a knife, a cupboard, a cat and mouse, some tinned food, a teapot and keys. The background is a badge colour that fits perfectly with the more vibrant foreground colors that pop out at you. He has used the cubism style and also used paints and collage. All of the items in this piece are stacked up on top of each other in a collage form so that you can see the items on the bottom briefly.

This is a wonderfully done piece of art that makes me feel mystified and second guessing myself, wanting to know more.

For me at a first glance this artwork looks like the front window of a music shop with all of the instruments lined up behind each other; I would call it the music shop. But once I learned the title of the art was called the kitchen stove, you start to see the normal things you find in the kitchen but on a collage.

This artwork makes me feel mystified because you can’t decide what the piece really is. My mind says to me it’s a music shop but the artist deliberately makes you second guess yourself when looking at this piece.

I can make a connection to this piece of art because I have tend to help out in the kitchen. Sometimes I cut and peel the vegetables and prepare the food.

Overall this piece of art Is beautiful and well rounded, that makes me feel deceived whenever I see the artwork.

I recommend this piece of art to anyone looking for artwork that looks cool. If you want to see a piece of art that is similar maybe have a look at Pablo Picasso's
The 3 Musicians. You can find this piece of art and many others on this website here: https://www.artgallery.nsw.gov.au


Friday, May 26, 2017

Dance Style Information

This term we are learning how people use the arts to communicate. We have investigated the characteristics of different dance styles, we practiced our notetaking skills. We experimented with each style ourselves and created our own dance sequences.

Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Narrative response


In class lately we have been writing narratives and responses to narratives. I decided to review Hidden life written by Zak Klempel. 
First I wrote a review and then I reviewed the story with Jakob in a video. Hope you enjoy.
Click the link for my written versionLink

Thursday, April 13, 2017

Narrative Writing

For writing in the past few weeks we have been writing narratives. My reflective comments are below.
I really liked writing these narratives, but the editing wasn’t my favorite part but I battled through it. The game of awesome was my favorite part and helped me with this narrative especially. I need to work on my punctuation skills and grammar. Overall I thought I did really well.