Trailblazer In Space Giant Haiku
Feeling great about it
Ready for takeoff right now
Really excited
Things are great up here
The photo is keeping me
Nobody to talk to
65 years gone
Tell sweet mother I’m coming
Just give me some time
23000
Targus fugit Bags packed bro
The chimp is back home
Starting the plunge down
Earth here i am take me back
Back into orbit
I’ve come back for you
Nature is what I have pictured
Sweet mother I’m back
Not what I wanted
Why the concrete jungles Mum
Tell me what happened
It’s not a planet
It’s a home for all of us
Including me here
Hi Hamish Im Sara from Blaketown school I liked how you where creative with your writing,but maybe next time you could check your punctuation,but other than that its good
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