Hi Hamish, I like how you instead of just leaving that wall you lost unknown you actually told us about us and told us what it looked like and I think you explained that really well my favorite wall is your first one.
Good effort Hamish. I like how you included an introduction in your recording. It was a bit difficult to see the walls on each side of you whare so be sure to check camera angles and put yourself inthe shoes of your audience. It would be great to see you recreate your 4th wall before we put in on display - it sounds interesting!
Nice descriptions of your whare Hamish. Could you get the images closer to the camera, as mentioned by Ms J too? I wonder where your emotional wall got to and could you please make another one??? I loved the fact that you described this wall regardless of the fact it wasn't there...After hearing and seeing you so engaged with this project I'm really looking forward to your next one!
Hi Mrs H I will make a new 4th wall probably at the end of the day something must have happened to it. Thank you for teaching the artistic part along the way and thanks for the feedback
Hi Hamish,
ReplyDeleteI like how you instead of just leaving that wall you lost unknown you actually told us about us and told us what it looked like and I think you explained that really well my favorite wall is your first one.
Good effort Hamish. I like how you included an introduction in your recording. It was a bit difficult to see the walls on each side of you whare so be sure to check camera angles and put yourself inthe shoes of your audience. It would be great to see you recreate your 4th wall before we put in on display - it sounds interesting!
ReplyDeleteNice descriptions of your whare Hamish. Could you get the images closer to the camera, as mentioned by Ms J too? I wonder where your emotional wall got to and could you please make another one??? I loved the fact that you described this wall regardless of the fact it wasn't there...After hearing and seeing you so engaged with this project I'm really looking forward to your next one!
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs H I will make a new 4th wall probably at the end of the day something must have happened to it. Thank you for teaching the artistic part along the way and thanks for the feedback
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