Thursday, April 13, 2017

Narrative Writing

For writing in the past few weeks we have been writing narratives. My reflective comments are below.
I really liked writing these narratives, but the editing wasn’t my favorite part but I battled through it. The game of awesome was my favorite part and helped me with this narrative especially. I need to work on my punctuation skills and grammar. Overall I thought I did really well.
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  1. zhyonMay 12, 2017 at 12:24 PM

    hi im zhyon and i go to kawakawa primary school i rely liked your story and how confident you are to say your story is very cool i and i like this post

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    1. UnknownMay 26, 2017 at 10:15 AM

      Hi Zhyon Thank you for the comment on my story. Maybe next time I could have some feedback for what i should do next time. Thanks from Hamish.

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