Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Lake Brunner School in Moana, near Greymouth, NZ.
Hello Hamish, Your story is funny and I really enjoyed it. maybe next time in future you could make some more of you fantastic and funny story's.
Great comment Catrin. I agree! Hamish you are a super creative writer. We especially liked it when you read it aloud to us in class - you should consider adding a recording of you doing so to this post to entertain your audience!
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello Hamish, Your story is funny and I really enjoyed it. maybe next time in future you could make some more of you fantastic and funny story's.
ReplyDeleteGreat comment Catrin. I agree! Hamish you are a super creative writer. We especially liked it when you read it aloud to us in class - you should consider adding a recording of you doing so to this post to entertain your audience!
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