Spring Time
Where blossoms bloom,
Becoming day at night,
In the season of Halloween,
Where people get a fright.
Animals being born,
Waiting for the summer,
This heavy rain
Is a real bummer.
Birds chirping,
Flowers in the tree,
What do you know
The cat’s next to me.
Barbecues outside,
Sun beaming down,
Bees flying,
Dad looks like a clown.
Vegetables growing,
Want the pool,
This is why
Spring is cool.
If there was a word
To describe this season,
I could say anything
Without reason.
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